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06.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Time Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Ink Empress

Poem of the Day 07.03.2024

4th place in the contest

Time is reality A deck of cards with a joker Coincidences does make a difference Draw the ace don't be picky Steady steps mechanically driven Time, a macabre prank sinks deep The night train maintains its route

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Lin Lane

Date: 3/10/2024 1:13:00 PM

Anne-Lise, please forgive my belated potd congratulations for your poetry. Hugs, sweet friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/9/2024 6:37:00 PM

That last line is haunting, Anne Lise! congratulations on POTD!

Ink Empress

Date: 3/8/2024 11:11:00 AM

Dear anne lise, wow thats a beautiful picture to go with your write, i love the way youv played around with words, unique and creative, pleasure reading this, congratulations on your win and also potd, sending you light always

Jay Narain

Date: 3/8/2024 9:43:00 AM

What a contrast, from POTD to low ranking in contest. Be happy.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2024 10:52:00 AM

- Yes, you say something ... "some like the mother and others like the daughter" is a saying we use, Jay :))) - Smiling :)

Peter Dome

Date: 3/8/2024 9:30:00 AM

An excellent clever piece. Inspiring. Love the pic. Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2024 10:58:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Peter :) - hugs

Deb M

Date: 3/8/2024 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD Sunshine for a very cleverly written and apt poem about time…..Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2024 10:58:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Deb :) - hugs

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/8/2024 5:36:00 AM

Like you say….there’s no stopping it. At least we have photo albums. A little luck helps too…you’re so right!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2024 10:57:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Duke :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 3/8/2024 3:17:00 AM

The pendulum of the clock swings fast and time fleets away before any one can slower its pace. So enjoy every moment that we get. Many things happen as a coincidence and we are to some extent helpless. Without change, things will move as designed ! Great poem. Congratulations Anne on your POTD. Love and hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2024 10:57:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/8/2024 2:17:00 AM

Glad I checked in Anne-Lise, belated congratulations on your POTD honour. I'm travelling again. Have a lovely weekend. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/8/2024 4:54:00 AM

Down south in the uk.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2024 2:21:00 AM

- Thanks, Tom :) - Where ? - Enjoy your weekend too :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/8/2024 12:05:00 AM

Wonderful. Congrats on POTD. Love and prayers, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2024 1:42:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Gina :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/7/2024 9:55:00 PM

What a great Poem Anne-Lise Congratulations. A well earned POTD. and so much fun. Wen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2024 1:41:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Wen :) - hugs

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/7/2024 6:44:00 PM

We should cherish each moment given, because time does move so quickly. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2024 1:41:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Brandy :) - hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 3/7/2024 4:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD, Anne-Lise! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2024 1:40:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Bill :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/7/2024 3:08:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, yes the time ticks sometimes slowly sometimes quickly. Hugs. Darlene. Congratulations on The POTD

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/8/2024 10:13:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile, You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2024 1:40:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Darlene :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/7/2024 12:00:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I love this brilliantly written, deep poem. Warmest congratulations on POTD. hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2024 1:22:00 PM

- Thank you very much,Evelyn :) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 3/7/2024 11:43:00 AM

Congrats on POTD my friend..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2024 1:22:00 PM

- Thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 3/7/2024 10:49:00 AM

Congrats on POTD award. Creative writing.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2024 1:23:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Jay :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/7/2024 10:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your "Ticking Time" write. Yep, time keeps ticking away. "Good Luck" Have a great day with your wonderful win..................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2024 1:24:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs

Jim Slaughter

Date: 3/7/2024 10:23:00 AM

Time as a "card game"...okay, I can see that. To me, it has been more of a "craps shoot"! Good one, Anne-Lise, and congrats on POTD.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2024 1:24:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Jim :) - hugs

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/7/2024 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD Anne-Lise! Luck of the draw? Loved the surreal painting! Hugs~Anaya

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2024 1:25:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Anaya :) - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2024 9:38:00 AM

Great verse, congratulations on POTD. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2024 1:25:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 3/7/2024 7:12:00 AM

Back with Congrats on POTD Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2024 1:26:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs

RADHIKA AGARWAL

Date: 3/7/2024 7:07:00 AM

Thats wonderful.. Also new here please have a look at my poems:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2024 1:26:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Radhika :) - hugs

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 3/7/2024 6:48:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, The visuals you created with your poignant pen are wonderful. I love the reference to the night train and it's regularity. Congratulations on this POTD and enjoy this well earned recognition. Blessings to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2024 1:26:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Nancy :) - hugs

Warren Doll

Date: 3/7/2024 6:18:00 AM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on POTD ~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2024 1:27:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Warren :) - hugs