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12/31/2012 3:21:25 PM
My Reality	I sit, eyes open to this portrayal of reality. I wish to reveal my true self, so I look out And witness the sights broken with a fine brutality By those chosen to keep us safe- happy tragedy. But seeing without Does not reveal within.
12/31/2012 3:23:35 PM
Mirror Me	I liked it. It had a deep meaning- hiding behind a mirror- and felt profound. I especially liked, "For lying behind your mirror, / Is another side of you," because I felt a bit of double meaning in "lying" (physically lying behind and the act of telling a lie). Good work!
1/1/2013 8:40:56 AM
T i m e	Time turns its wheel, The pace exceeding comfort. Yet, The world has proceeded Complacent. Time transitions with insistence Between raging waterfall and, for a distance, whispering river. Ever changing path and Speed. Time moves, impatient, Its inhabitants – unaffected- Even while questioning Existence.
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