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4/5/2011 10:11:08 AM
Extravagant	Extravagant- The cries for help Unheard Step by step She walks into the darkness. Each without a print- I guess her path will remain Unknown. Unsure- Of all the places she would go How she would get there and Why.
4/5/2011 10:13:19 AM
The Fallacy Within	Smiles- On the surface shine so bright, But rotting within. The dentist comes and saves The smile, but leaves a fallacy Within. Fake- Putty packed in to fill the hole, normal now. Yet never feeling the same. The tongue slides over The stranger. Not accepting- Yet rejection is no option. Stuck with the fake Injection, fake happiness, Fake smiles.
4/5/2011 10:32:15 AM
Extravagant	I would really like some comments on my poem please... more at ashthepoet.blospot.com
4/5/2011 10:33:25 AM
The Fallacy Within	I would really like some comments on this poem... more at ashthepoet.blogspot.com
4/6/2011 2:02:06 PM
To Parish	To parish would be to gain- Freedom. Freedom From that which haunts me. Not to perish in a physical sense, No- That would be pointless. I must perish mentally. Kill that which envelops my Being. Thoughts Of a bright future, A better tomorrow, A new life.
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