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4/6/2011 2:02:06 PM
Ashley Blodgett
Posts: 5
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To parish would be to gain-
Freedom. Freedom
From that which haunts me.
Not to perish in a physical sense,
No-
That would be pointless.
I must perish mentally.
Kill that which envelops my
Being. Thoughts
Of a bright future,
A better tomorrow,
A new life.
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