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Blog Posted:6/21/2015 4:58:00 AM


The courtyard was light by the dim glow of the gas lamps on the entrance archway. Leaning against the wall inside the arch, half hidden by the shadows, was a young man dressed in corduroy jacket and trousers.  The eerie silence was broken only by the sounds of night creatures that seemed to eat into the stillness with echoes of desperation.  Suddenly, as if by intent, one of the lamps flared up to announce the arrival of a cloaked figure appearing through the archway.  The young man shrank back as the figure approached but turned to face him, then awaited his arrival.  Only muttered sounds could be heard as the stranger handed a small box over to him, turned and evaporated into the night.

Having fulfilled the purpose of his meeting, the young man crossed the courtyard and disappeared into a wooden door in the shadows at the far end of the courtyard.  Total silence returned, not even the normal sounds of the night could be heard.  The gas lamps seemed hardly to penetrate the darkness that now enveloped the scene.  No trace of evidence was left of the exchange that had taken place.

In the cold gloom of a small living room a young man’s voice could be heard anxiously talking to his mother,  “Mam, I’ve got the matches from Uncle, can you light the fire now please?”

Ivor G Davies



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Date: 6/21/2015 7:35:00 PM
I am envisioning this as a ghost story, and the uncle had come to him because they were so cold inside the house. but then I read what you said below!! Hmmm, I think you should go for the melodramatic!!
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Date: 6/21/2015 7:35:00 PM
Very good I loved how you ended it!
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Date: 6/21/2015 12:25:00 PM
NO IVOR....NO INDEED....You are not going to get away with his mum lit the fire and they got warm you assume....NOPE...get with the program...If you don't want to continue then stop writing so great...
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Ivor Davies
Date: 6/21/2015 3:31:00 PM
The setting was malitia buildings part of Chester castle in England where I lived in the fifties and it was haunted.....
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Date: 6/21/2015 3:24:00 PM
Looks like I may have to take this a bit further then?
Date: 6/21/2015 12:23:00 PM
was uncle dead....by any hoot of the imagination? And you had best continue...we don't know where you live in England but we'll find your house.....if we don't get a continuation...that's a US Promise and you know what Bombers we can be........
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Date: 6/21/2015 8:51:00 AM
Now you have my interest, Ivor, continue please . . . what does he do next.... very well written prose
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Date: 6/21/2015 11:33:00 AM
Oh yes, I took a writing a class once and this is the type of thing they had us doing as exercises, setting a scene that sadly went no where
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Ivor Davies
Date: 6/21/2015 10:50:00 AM
Although based on an actual place, this was an exercise in setting a dramatic scene around a 'normal' event! I supose hes mun lit the fire and they all got nice and warm .....sorry, Ivor

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