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The Sky and the Spray

If good deeds could go up high

I'm sure the sky would shine so bright

If sins were to spread the dark

The sky would be black

No streak of light, No spark

We are a pair of love birds

Love is all we give away

So together with love the sky we spray

If butterflies and birds were all that flied

From above I'd see the smiling sky

If the sky was filled with mere cries

And it could hear only lies

The colour of the sky would go all black

But we would smile and spray our way through

Filling the weaknesses in between that lacks

If trees would nod and fox would trot

The sky would exhibit the shining stars 

So clear for us we'll spot the mars

We'll stare at the sky and spray the love around

Those dreams and hope lifting us off the ground

But if trees would dry and birds won't fly

Then what's it all for? What is life?

But both of us know that we'll just smile

Even when things aren't right

Cos we get this life once

So we'll spray the sky

With reds and pinks

Strengthening the links

Lessening the spaces

With hints of love and care's traces

We'll make it to the end with the spray of love and the colorful sky

We'll be always happy and we won't cry

And then we'll die

With a smile

Up in the sky

The sky that we made so bright

Copyright © Manahil Naik | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/17/2016 12:42:00 AM

manahil naik, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
Date: 1/14/2016 10:11:00 PM

Hope you enjoyed the pervious comment ** SKAT ** :)
Date: 8/8/2015 12:03:00 AM

Manahil, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Date: 8/6/2015 12:53:00 AM

manahil, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Date: 8/5/2015 8:51:00 AM

A poem highlighting the outcome of good and bad deeds.....let the good prevail and let the short life be always sweet and vibrantly painted! Good poem! Love, Anulaxmi:-)

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