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The Sky and the Spray

If good deeds could go up high I'm sure the sky would shine so bright If sins were to spread the dark The sky would be black No streak of light, No spark We are a pair of love birds Love is all we give away So together with love the sky we spray If butterflies and birds were all that flied From above I'd see the smiling sky If the sky was filled with mere cries And it could hear only lies The colour of the sky would go all black But we would smile and spray our way through Filling the weaknesses in between that lacks If trees would nod and fox would trot The sky would exhibit the shining stars So clear for us we'll spot the mars We'll stare at the sky and spray the love around Those dreams and hope lifting us off the ground But if trees would dry and birds won't fly Then what's it all for? What is life? But both of us know that we'll just smile Even when things aren't right Cos we get this life once So we'll spray the sky With reds and pinks Strengthening the links Lessening the spaces With hints of love and care's traces We'll make it to the end with the spray of love and the colorful sky We'll be always happy and we won't cry And then we'll die With a smile Up in the sky The sky that we made so bright

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/17/2016 12:42:00 AM
manahil naik, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 10:11:00 PM
Hope you enjoyed the pervious comment ** SKAT ** :)
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Date: 8/8/2015 12:03:00 AM
Manahil, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/6/2015 12:53:00 AM
manahil, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/5/2015 8:51:00 AM
A poem highlighting the outcome of good and bad deeds.....let the good prevail and let the short life be always sweet and vibrantly painted! Good poem! Love, Anulaxmi:-)
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