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The Man Who Slapped God

Workshop poem-The Man Who Slapped God

There  is  no  word  like  coincidence,
If  such  a  word  would’ve  reigned
My country  wouldn’t  be  free…
There  is  nothing  like  impossible,
If  such a  thing  would’ve been
‘YOU’  wouldn’t  be  born…
Who  said,  guilt  cannot  be  cleaned?
If  this  wouldn’t  be
We all would have died!
Let’s  say  if coincidence  exists,
Say  impossible  ride  wide…
Then  I  would  be  the  first
To  slap  and whack GOD!

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/21/2016 6:44:00 PM nice to see this one Again. LINDA
Skat A Date: 12/29/2015 6:40:00 PM RISHI, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
Cyndi Macmillan Date: 6/10/2015 4:12:00 PM The last three lines I found quite confusing. Say impossible ride wide? What is it you are trying to say with line? Also... say your countries name. SING IT! :) India would not be free! I'd also suggest an exclamation mark as opposed to an ellipsis. Hopefully, other participants will drop by soon and provide further feedback.
Cyndi Macmillan Date: 6/10/2015 4:08:00 PM Hello, the workshop is locked but not closed. This will give participants a chance to show their REVISED poems and also give a bit more time for all who have not provided any feedback to do so. Please visit my blog when you can. Thank you.
Skat A Date: 6/9/2015 11:54:00 PM Rishi,:) congrats on your workshop poem
Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/15/2015 8:02:00 PM Just one question [assuming I am in agreement with you on most points :)][Let’s say if coincidence exists,/Say impossible ride wide…] do not use the ... you are using them incorrectly - BUT what does that mean? & how do you get from there to slapping God ;) [no worries God for me has no face so it is funny to me to think you could slam something as large as universes?] I would like to understand your premise? Light & love
John Lawless Date: 5/14/2015 9:06:00 PM Hey Rishi, I have often wanted to give "god" a good slap myself. Welcome to the soup.
Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/14/2015 7:26:00 PM Rishi, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Skat A Date: 5/14/2015 6:43:00 PM WOw, WOW, Rishi, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

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