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The Man Who Slapped God

Workshop poem-The Man Who Slapped God There is no word like coincidence, If such a word would’ve reigned My country wouldn’t be free… There is nothing like impossible, If such a thing would’ve been ‘YOU’ wouldn’t be born… Who said, guilt cannot be cleaned? If this wouldn’t be We all would have died! Let’s say if coincidence exists, Say impossible ride wide… Then I would be the first To slap and whack GOD!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 6:44:00 PM

nice to see this one Again. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/29/2015 6:40:00 PM

RISHI, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 6/10/2015 4:12:00 PM

The last three lines I found quite confusing. Say impossible ride wide? What is it you are trying to say with line? Also... say your countries name. SING IT! :) India would not be free! I'd also suggest an exclamation mark as opposed to an ellipsis. Hopefully, other participants will drop by soon and provide further feedback.

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 6/10/2015 4:08:00 PM

Hello, the workshop is locked but not closed. This will give participants a chance to show their REVISED poems and also give a bit more time for all who have not provided any feedback to do so. Please visit my blog when you can. Thank you.

Skat A

Date: 6/9/2015 11:54:00 PM

Rishi,:) congrats on your workshop poem

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/15/2015 8:02:00 PM

Just one question [assuming I am in agreement with you on most points :)][Let’s say if coincidence exists,/Say impossible ride wide…] do not use the ... you are using them incorrectly - BUT what does that mean? & how do you get from there to slapping God ;) [no worries God for me has no face so it is funny to me to think you could slam something as large as universes?] I would like to understand your premise? Light & love

John Lawless

Date: 5/14/2015 9:06:00 PM

Hey Rishi, I have often wanted to give "god" a good slap myself. Welcome to the soup.

Rishi Raj
Date: 5/15/2015 12:33:00 AM

Its great to hear from soupsters.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2015 7:26:00 PM

Rishi, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/14/2015 6:43:00 PM

WOw, WOW, Rishi, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Rishi Raj
Date: 5/15/2015 12:36:00 AM

Hi Its great to have friends cum critics like u. I m from India & started writing poems at 13. I love hanging out with friends & teaching. Nice feeling @ soup