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Save Me

Please can’t you see?
When you’re looking at me
That I need love
I need a family

Please don’t forget me
Out on the street
I need a home
Someone I can greet

My last home wasn’t happy
It wasn’t okay
My owner beat me
And told me to stay

Despite my mean treatment
I did as I was told
But the mean man wouldn’t feed me
He left me out in the cold

Tied with a chain
Very close to a tree
There was no way I could ever
Escape and get free

Days would go by
With not one kind word
Hate and resentment 
Was all that was heard

Please someone save me
From this horrible place
I’m running out of time
My life is a race

One last time
I finally break free
But the chain that had bound me
Was then turned on me

He beat me so hard
I couldn’t hold on
My life beat out of me
Until I was gone

No more pain
A better place ahead
Never thought it would be
Because I was dead

Never mistreat
Hate and abuse
Always have a heart
And care what you do

Please be kind
Remember that I was someone too
You really wouldn’t want the same thing
To happen to you

Copyright © Paiten Hetrick | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/22/2016 11:35:00 PM

Paiten Hetrick, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
Date: 11/29/2014 10:59:00 PM

Hi Paiten, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
Date: 11/17/2014 1:56:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Paiten - I choose your first moving and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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