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Not What It's Thought To Be

What do our thoughts think? 
This (?) can be deeper then any depth imaginable 
Only if tangible, but do thoughts have thoughts? 
I mean it's manageable to be felt but not by feeling
Only to be felt with your heart and not your physicality 
Try touching that with the thought about thinking 
If you can think it then no way you can't see it
But what do your thoughts think about this? 
This question brought can seem 
so stupid and vague 
Senseless ought to be what is defined 
But what defines our senses is something much more Devine
If you are close minded be sure to not open your mouth 
Might not make any sense, but on a second thought 
This can give a meaning to what is sought... from your mind
Every second of every day 
A mind is racing with what to say and be said 
Whether in a dream or to get into another persons head 
Our darkest confession can be formed from a session of lyrical depression 
Find a profession to start addressing the lesson of teaching to think a thought 
Maybe all that has just been said.. is pointless 
But the none the less the point was the capture your eyes
Locked on to these words like an examination 
My only goal was to open at least one mind to think 
For a minute I was a thief and stole your attention 
And if you thought about your thoughts or simply about thinking 
Then you got my message 
Maybe not in plain form but it is plain to see 
that we all think our thoughts-- are thinking to be seen.

Copyright © Eddie Cruz | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 5/6/2016 10:05:00 PM

EDDIE, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
Date: 4/26/2016 5:58:00 PM

eddie cruz, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
Date: 1/7/2014 2:14:00 AM

Hi Eddie, I would like to extend my hand in welcome to the PoetrySoup community. I love the introspection the poem brings out - the point on what defines our senses is on point. Thoughts beget actions. Very well written! There’s a lot to learn from each other here and hopefully you will have a great time while at it. Feel free to drop me a line when you can. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Vicky.

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