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Body Bag

She sits alone just about cry
With a blade in her hand 
It's taking all her might just not 
to try
To slit her wrist and say 
goodbye
As she writes a letter all we see
Is a long list of apologizes
She wants the pain to cease to 
be
Yet it only seems to lower her 
to her knees
"I'm sorry Mother, I'm sorry 
sister, forgive me"
As the red pours out of her 
pale body
She realizes its not deep 
enough and wants this to be a 
tragedy
"Will I be missed or even cried 
over?"
Brick by brick her wall starts to 
break
With the knife to her neck she 
is sealing her fate
Her mom comes barging in but 
it is to late
The sad little girl has added to 
the suicide rate
Her mother falls to her knees 
and screams why
Her sisters come in and start to 
cry
They can't do anything she is 
already gone yet they still try
They zip her body bag and she 
drifts away
She didn't know if there could 
be a better day 
She regrets her decision yet 
can't go back
Her family is broken because 
its her they lack

Copyright © Hidden Writer | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/16/2013 10:19:00 AM

A nice one dear one,ope u find poetrysoup a safe haven where u can enhance ur poetic skills and social skills as well. Welcome to our world. Love, Bob- Based on Belief.
Date: 11/12/2013 8:44:00 AM

Hidden , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Date: 11/11/2013 6:45:00 PM

hello Hidden,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Date: 11/11/2013 6:13:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Hidden Writer ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

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