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Body Bag

She sits alone just about cry With a blade in her hand It's taking all her might just not to try To slit her wrist and say goodbye As she writes a letter all we see Is a long list of apologizes She wants the pain to cease to be Yet it only seems to lower her to her knees "I'm sorry Mother, I'm sorry sister, forgive me" As the red pours out of her pale body She realizes its not deep enough and wants this to be a tragedy "Will I be missed or even cried over?" Brick by brick her wall starts to break With the knife to her neck she is sealing her fate Her mom comes barging in but it is to late The sad little girl has added to the suicide rate Her mother falls to her knees and screams why Her sisters come in and start to cry They can't do anything she is already gone yet they still try They zip her body bag and she drifts away She didn't know if there could be a better day She regrets her decision yet can't go back Her family is broken because its her they lack

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/16/2013 10:19:00 AM
A nice one dear one,ope u find poetrysoup a safe haven where u can enhance ur poetic skills and social skills as well. Welcome to our world. Love, Bob- Based on Belief.
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Date: 11/12/2013 8:44:00 AM
Hidden , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/11/2013 6:45:00 PM
hello Hidden,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/11/2013 6:13:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Hidden Writer ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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