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Red Riding Hood Revised

Little miss red riding hood
In a shady neighborhood
Stumbled on an empty shack
Ate all the portage 
Hit the sack
Momma, Poppa, baby bear
Came home to find their food bowls bear
Thought Goldie Locks came back to eat
But found red riding hood asleep
And because she ate something of theirs
They ate her
Those ravenous bears


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  1. Date: 3/4/2015 5:59:00 PM

    A darling re-write, so lovable like older children would latch onto, maybe even teens. Hard to write for that age group. If she really took in all the portage, she likely would be in the john. But I like it anyway; it adds to the chaos in the piece.
  1. Date: 1/2/2015 10:31:00 PM

    Jon, where are you? I sure do miss you!! Please come back
  1. Date: 4/5/2014 11:39:00 PM

    I love this. I just read it to my 7 yr old grand daughter. thumbs up all the way ;) I have a few like this ;)
  1. Date: 1/26/2014 2:48:00 PM

    lol, now this is so much better than the fairytales I heard at school!!
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 10:23:00 AM

    Jon, you deserve a bear hug for this!! lol my best, chuck
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 12:39:00 AM

    hahaha, GREAT way to revise it!!!! I sure enjoyed this.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 10:13:00 PM

    This is cute, Jon! I enjoyed the read! Love, Kim
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 4:15:00 PM

    That is a new and funnier rendition of the story, made me smile, Jon, well done....peter
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 8:39:00 AM

    Jon A very evil and violent re-write of this classic tale. What happened to the cute and fun ones. Is someone possessing my sweet and kind friend. LOL Nice job Hugs
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 4:39:00 AM

    - A new twist ..... not recommended for young children :)))) - Well done, Jon ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 12:56:00 AM

    Very flowing humor write, Jon