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Heartstrings 

Thin ice cracks
Carefully you tread
Tiptoe in silence
Holding inhaled breath
Fear heavy footsteps
Breaking through thin ice.
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  1. St.Cross Avatar
    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 5/11/2013 8:59:00 AM
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    ................ ‡ Ps., I Forgot To Mention, I Love Your Beauty's Precious Picture Tis, Sooo Beautiful This, 'Beautiful Love.' *
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 5/10/2013 10:23:00 PM
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    ‡ Compared Unto 'This Life' For Many, Sweet Beautiful Dawnie, Breaking Through Thin Or Thick Ice Would Seem But Merciful, When Considering The Hell On Earth They Continue To Endure Amid This Nightmare's Moment In Time And Believe Me, It Takes A World Of Strength Just To Survive When In Truth Again For Many, It Would Seem So Much Easier To Simply Die; Escape This Flesh This Valley These Sorrows Their Pain; Cursed Be The Breath Whom Holds Such Life?! ˜ 'Heartstrings' ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 5/10/2013 7:04:00 PM
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    Hi Dawn, , :-) I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. About your poem: walking on eggshells is not an easy thing to do, deep imagery... LOVE LINDA

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