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Sympathy

With depression her heart does sink Her companion comes in eye blink Without a word that she does say Compassion is shown both this way No words are shared, no given ink Puppy holds her heart in a wink Her face carries not such a drink This punishment in prime of day With depression She seems to be in state of think From her imagination brink She sits there sadly not to lay Dog's on her shoulder that he may Bring companionship, nothing pink With depression
Contest: Briton Riviere Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Painting: Sympathy 6/18/2013

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  1. Date: 6/19/2013 8:04:00 AM

    languid imagery and emotions, russel... you definitely have a mesmerizing way of capturing the readers' attention- and keeping them captivated, my friend.. you definitely did it again!... well done!....:) huggs!
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 5:21:00 AM

    A fine rhyme scheme here and even d poignance is nicely portrayed. Pleez do d fav of reviewin my latest poem.
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 4:10:00 AM

    And powerful write, a treat to read. Rick

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