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Fairy Tale Death

Nothing turned out the way I wanted it to.
Everything holy crashed down to hell.
No nothing turned out the way I wanted it to.
Thinking of it makes me unwell. 

The fairytale guidelines never warned us
What happens when happy endings fail.
We never were told of the ripple effect.
That shakes out the last tooth and last nail.

Watching it start as a crack in the crown.
Passing it off to be nothing of worry.
It wasn’t long before walls toppled down;
Before the ceilings followed suit in a hurry.

It was sooner than later, but later than right,
By the time that this great kingdom crumbled.
When the stars flickered out, and all turned to night.
We sat in the dark and were humbled.

I would not rebuild it; for the design was at fault.
It was in the wrong that we stood for it to stand.
However the world itself is not to blame by default. 
Blame goes to building vast dreams in the sand. 

A fairytale dying, is an ugly thing to observe
It does not enjoy being prolonged.
It’s withering life I tried to conserve
Thus the fairytales memory I wronged.

Doubtless is the fact, the dream needed to die,
Laid to rest in the ground for some peace.
Yet a dream flying away towards the realm in the sky
Should not be signal for a world to cease.

The ground is unsuitable for a fairytale world,
But not for normal life to survive. 
As soiled as it is now by war weapons hurled,
It doesn’t mean that all life forms should die.

Copyright © Kailan Dalziel | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 4/21/2024 11:12:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Date: 2/9/2016 12:45:00 AM

Kailan, awesome poem. LINDA
Date: 11/15/2010 10:52:00 AM

Excellent write! I look forward to the new world (2Peter 3:13)
Date: 11/5/2010 8:23:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kailan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Date: 11/4/2010 9:13:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry today with its intriguing and creative theme.. hope your time on Soup is special and fun.. and u will check out the contest scene offered to members... good luck with luv...

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