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''Lady Queen's of Queen's''

Lady Queen's Of Queen's
Where? ''ladies'' maybe
Take a chance of romance thus
As whomsoever excels this memorable
Glance thus ''chance after chance''
We've observed the muse to be excused
When? exhaled breath stops to then breath
In separate ways amongst one sentence
Said within a huge sized breathless breath
Forever sleeps When? applied to die in disguise
Thee ''lady Queen's'' feels When? she's
Feeling thus an diseaseful illness
Concludes Who? kills to be heeled
Why? ''hungered feelings'' substitutes to
Cure those everlastingly opened doors
However, cures needlessly needy ''ladies of
The Queen's'' blinds us ''useful Queen's''
As
What? keeps ''joyous time'' to spread even
More joy to enjoy
Beforehand eased to ''wait until exhale'' excepts
Lady Queen's of Queen's!

Copyright © Makeda Costello | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 5/6/2016 9:30:00 AM

MAKEDA, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ~SKAT~
Date: 4/24/2016 11:20:00 AM

Makeda Costello, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*"
Date: 5/3/2009 1:34:00 PM

Makeda, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Date: 4/26/2009 1:44:00 PM

Congratulations, Makeda on this interesting write becoming a "first round survivor" and best of luck in the contest!
Date: 4/10/2009 4:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals Makeda. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Date: 3/29/2009 11:00:00 AM

Fascinating write using a very difficult form!! I like the repetition of the title within this piece and I'm wondering if you mean to say "healed" in line 13 ? The word "heeled" also works here but takes on a darker meaning connected to "diseaseful illness" ... works either way but I had to add my two cents ... LOL ... hope you don't mind ... congratulations on your writing being selected this week, Makeda !!
Date: 3/29/2009 12:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. GB Always, Tyesha
Date: 3/26/2009 9:11:00 AM

congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!
Date: 3/26/2009 7:48:00 AM

Congratulations Makeda on your sonnet being featured. Vince
Date: 3/26/2009 4:30:00 AM

Congratulations on having this lovely write featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
Date: 3/25/2009 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Date: 3/25/2009 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured this week. Kirstie
Date: 3/23/2009 6:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Love, Shar
Date: 11/19/2008 8:28:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Love, Carol
Date: 11/4/2008 11:06:00 AM

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