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''Lady Queen's of Queen's''

Lady Queen's Of Queen's Where? ''ladies'' maybe Take a chance of romance thus As whomsoever excels this memorable Glance thus ''chance after chance'' We've observed the muse to be excused When? exhaled breath stops to then breath In separate ways amongst one sentence Said within a huge sized breathless breath Forever sleeps When? applied to die in disguise Thee ''lady Queen's'' feels When? she's Feeling thus an diseaseful illness Concludes Who? kills to be heeled Why? ''hungered feelings'' substitutes to Cure those everlastingly opened doors However, cures needlessly needy ''ladies of The Queen's'' blinds us ''useful Queen's'' As What? keeps ''joyous time'' to spread even More joy to enjoy Beforehand eased to ''wait until exhale'' excepts Lady Queen's of Queen's!

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Date: 5/6/2016 9:30:00 AM
MAKEDA, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/24/2016 11:20:00 AM
Makeda Costello, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*"
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Date: 5/3/2009 1:34:00 PM
Makeda, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations, Makeda on this interesting write becoming a "first round survivor" and best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals Makeda. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2009 11:00:00 AM
Fascinating write using a very difficult form!! I like the repetition of the title within this piece and I'm wondering if you mean to say "healed" in line 13 ? The word "heeled" also works here but takes on a darker meaning connected to "diseaseful illness" ... works either way but I had to add my two cents ... LOL ... hope you don't mind ... congratulations on your writing being selected this week, Makeda !!
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Date: 3/29/2009 12:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. GB Always, Tyesha
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:11:00 AM
congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!
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Date: 3/26/2009 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations Makeda on your sonnet being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/26/2009 4:30:00 AM
Congratulations on having this lovely write featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Kirstie
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Date: 3/23/2009 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/19/2008 8:28:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2008 11:06:00 AM
Inspirational poetist
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