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An exaggerated style, the zoot suit was a statement in clothes. Yet it fell into ill repute, history shows. Outlandishly flamboyant and distinct, comedy bore the roots. That grew in the Harlem precinct, as culture suits. With wide lapels and tight-pegged trousers, they seemed ostentatious. And denounced as rabble-rousers; loose and spacious. Worn by African-American youth and poor Mexican teens. They looked rebellious and uncouth, more so than jeans. Oft accessorized with a gold key chain and a fedora hat. Wartime sailors showed their disdain; armed with a bat. About racial tension; more than fashion, L.A. riots broke out. And boys beat without compassion, left little doubt. (Rhyme) 12/21/2022 Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 1/24/2023 12:09:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your winning placement Emile. So creative and fun yet with a very relevant social commentary. Blessings my friend!
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Date: 1/24/2023 1:12:00 PM
Thanks, Sam, as always I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/24/2023 7:36:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing, I love your words, and image well done, Constance
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Date: 1/24/2023 8:39:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, your contests are always fun to write for, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/18/2023 3:40:00 AM
Creative way to go with this challenge. Congratulations on your winner. Sara.
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Date: 1/18/2023 8:02:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/17/2023 10:44:00 PM
Very beautiful writing.on Zoot Suit. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/18/2023 8:01:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/17/2023 7:39:00 PM
Entertaining as also informative and of course, exquisitely penned as always, Emile ~ congratulations on your win, going all the way to six stanzas against the minimum requirement of three, which most contestants chose
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Date: 1/18/2023 8:00:00 AM
Thanks, Unseeking, you are very gracious with your time and compliments, I appreciate both, Emile.
Date: 1/17/2023 5:46:00 PM
Those surrounding issues were prevalent in my simpler days, Emile, being of Hawaiian ancestry affected a camaraderie amongst understanding soul brothers from the East Oakland Projects and el hermanos from Jingle Town. We're too young and too old for the effects of trouble because fun was in the way. The Patty Hearst fiasco and ensuing food riots were blocks away, and the other blocks stood the Black Panthers, as well as both Colombian cartels. Congrats on your 1st Place win, Aloha William
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Date: 1/18/2023 7:49:00 AM
Thank you, Hilo, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 1/17/2023 5:40:00 PM
Loved the description of the zoot suit, the effect on society. So sad the tension at the end. Congratulations on a great write, Emile!
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Date: 1/18/2023 7:46:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/21/2022 10:43:00 AM
Very creative Emile along with a poetic history lesson! Best wishes for the contest and a Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/21/2022 10:54:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, and a Merry Christmas to you and yours my friend, Emile.

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