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This is a poetry eerily populated with ghosts and mummies and zomboid creatures who go on living though dead from love. — Patrick McGarth* ZOMBOID CREATURES no way out of the well…ceaseless pulley. forlorn, deep is the grave. for the dead, love is a bully no one can save. doped up, tears dry in somnambulant night. bones rave toward the cliff. a blind man’s bluff, i’ve lost my sight - this zomboid stiff. love dropped out; i’m eaten up with her scent - bouquet of floral bath. i pursue - a ghostlike lament, off beaten path. she sat upon the mound, of fresh dug soil, wrapped up in her own grief, a mummy terrified - a foil… aperitif. 1/7/2023 Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing Sponsor: Constance La France Theme Z word: Zomboid Used Howmanysyllables and rhymezone *Obtained from Merriam-Webster

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Date: 1/24/2023 12:02:00 PM
So creative Kim. You have set this scary tone wonderfully! Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2023 4:53:00 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 1/24/2023 7:35:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing, I love your words, the pic and quote, well done, Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2023 7:38:00 AM
Thanks so much! I had fun with this! God bless you!
Date: 1/19/2023 10:36:00 AM
Awesome verse, Kim. Love the words, "love is a bully" . Congratulations on your 1st place win in Constance’s contest. Hugs blessings, Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2023 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 1/18/2023 7:06:00 AM
Many congratulations on your contest win Kim, it's well deserved with this stunning poetry.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2023 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad! :)
Date: 1/18/2023 3:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2023 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 1/18/2023 2:34:00 AM
a mummy makes sense; well done and congratulations Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2023 9:28:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 1/17/2023 10:43:00 PM
Very beautiful writing on Zomboid Creatures. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2023 9:28:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 1/17/2023 4:59:00 PM
Your illuminating word choices, my dear Kim, whereto the totality of the inscribed is well themed, is a dreamt exposé riddled with mesmerizing wonderment my friend. My compliments on your seat edged 1st Place win! Aloha William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, William! :)
Date: 1/9/2023 6:53:00 PM
Somehow, I'm afraid I would be in grave condition were I to succumb to this aperitif! What a write! Wild! ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2023 8:04:00 PM
LOL…thank you, Gershon!
Date: 1/9/2023 2:48:00 AM
Great poem, dear Kim. Your poems are getting better and better.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2023 8:23:00 AM
I appreciate that! Thank you, Victor!
Date: 1/8/2023 7:02:00 PM
"she sat upon the mound, of fresh dug soil, wrapped up in her own grief, a mummy terrified - a foil… aperitif." Wild! Great imagery
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thanks so much, Joe!
Date: 1/8/2023 5:02:00 PM
Love concurs even in zomboid land. I could see her on the mound, I was enthralled! B0L, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2023 6:28:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya!
Date: 1/8/2023 10:08:00 AM
Kim, you did an excellent job of relating the Zomboid moment, and I like the vivid imagery that you paint with your words. Good luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2023 10:10:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad! I always appreciate you!
Date: 1/8/2023 4:20:00 AM
Very creative, Kim:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2023 4:58:00 AM
Thanks, Jo!

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