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Zombies, astral and metaphoric The zombie I like the most Is the Zombie astral. It’s typical residence is a bottle Which Voodoo bokor can sell it for luck Not at all a trouble maker Feed him with salt Will obey to return to its grave. But there are zombies as metaphor Difficult to handle mindless inclined to mindless Adherence to authorities And now in modern times we have a new Metaphorical Zombie, the forms of hacker Virus like Trojan horse Ever disobedient in character Most entertaining but less frightening Are the made-up zombies and the most obedient ones As all are familiar with zombie kits, Fake skin mixture, creamy face fainted Fake blood makers, with stipple sponge ======================== Date 10/12/13 Dr. Ram Mehta Third Place win Contest: Halloween poem contest poem with only 1 theme By Leonora Galinta

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Date: 11/23/2013 5:05:00 AM
chilling Ram congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/21/2013 6:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram.... Roger
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:53:00 AM
congratulations on your win Ram xx
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:37:00 PM
Dr Ram, , Congratulations on your win. take care ~xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:07:00 PM
A very unique poem for the zombie contest! Really good work! I enjoyed it! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem.
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:07:00 PM
Oh Dr. Mehta. you know more about zombies than I thought I wanted know. congratulations on a great win. love, Joyce
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:47:00 PM
this is a very unique one, Dr. Ram. So there is a trojan one by that name? interesting!! And yes, far scarier than the made up ones. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 11/20/2013 4:53:00 PM
Dr. . Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love
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Date: 11/20/2013 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations, I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:05:00 AM
- Interesting to read about Zombies - glad that they are not real! - Congratulations on your winning poem Dr. Ram !! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations my very dear friend Dr. Ram on your super win in my contest with only one theme, “Zombie”! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining and outstanding spooky poem. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/13/2013 9:21:00 PM
A very clever write using a wide range of zombie figures. Interesting perspectives. Congrats on the win :)
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Date: 10/12/2013 6:50:00 PM
You have found a different twist to this contest.......well done!!!
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Date: 10/12/2013 6:08:00 PM
An interesting poem, Dr. Ram. I had no idea that there were so many different types of zombies! But, now I do! And, I will run away from all of them! Terrific work! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for the nice comments!
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Date: 10/12/2013 3:34:00 PM
I have to confess my ignorance of zombies but I do recognize a good writing when I see one! Great work Dr. Ram, wish you good luck!
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Date: 10/12/2013 12:47:00 PM
This is very entertaining Dr. Ram.
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Date: 10/12/2013 6:18:00 AM
- Scary to meet .... on a dark night - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/12/2013 12:04:00 AM
awe, I love this one Dr Ram... nice to see something like this from you.. Good luck..Linda
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Date: 10/11/2013 11:30:00 PM
Nah, the real flesh eating zombies are the best, they are fearsome in their quest...to eat you! I really loved your different approach to the contest! I doubt anyone else will write a zombie poem such as this one, very clever! Great Work!!
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