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Written - 24th April 2024

Zen, Zinnia, Zephyr Words Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France

”Flowers are the creator’s finishing touch, perfection in last strokes of His brush.”Quote - Poet’s own Zinnia awakes in the morning mist Awaiting the moment the earth is kissed By the sun when it has come out to play And Zinnia displays floral array. Zinnia blossoms in many a hue Some are short, some grow statuesque tall too Their allure is a delight to behold A truth that surely cannot be opposed. Zinnia may grow in field or meadow Or awesomely gracing gardens also Dancing queens are Zinnias, proud they sway When gentle breezes come blowing their way. Zinnia attracts birds, butterflies, bees Their nectar and seeds satisfies all needs Jewels of earth Zinnias truly are Every single one is a blooming star.

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David Drowley

Date: 4/30/2024 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Makes me appreciate my zinnias even more.

Deb M

Date: 4/29/2024 12:43:00 PM

How lovely your poem on Zinnias is Belle! Debx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2024 6:18:00 PM

Thank you very much Deb… Beryl x

Robert Schatz

Date: 4/27/2024 8:17:00 PM

Congratulations Belle! I love how you end the poem: Jewels of earth Zinnias truly are Every single one is a blooming star.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2024 4:45:00 PM

Thank you very much Robert, truly I appreciate every word… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/27/2024 2:03:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Zinnia" flower write again. Have a blessed weekend..................

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2024 4:43:00 PM

Thank you for reading again Paula, that’s a poet’s delight and thanks also for the congratulations. Enjoy the day… Beryl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2024 10:21:00 AM

- So beautifully written, congratulations on your win in the contest, Beryl :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2024 4:40:00 PM

Thank you Ann-Lise :) ~ Hugs returned, Beryl

Constance La France

Date: 4/26/2024 1:52:00 PM

Beryl, congratulations on your win in my contest with this outstanding poem, I love the quote too, Constance

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/26/2024 4:59:00 PM

Thank you Constance, I’m delighted with my win in your contest, and thrilled you liked the poem and quote… Beryl

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/26/2024 10:02:00 AM

Zinias - what an awesome tribute to these 'blooming stars' - your rhyming is a pleasure to read and your vivid description of these 'dancing 'queens' is astounding. Such a wonderful write Beryl, my dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/26/2024 4:57:00 PM

Thank you so much Jennifer, your comments are a pleasure to read too. Blessings and hugs returned my friend… Beryl

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/26/2024 1:59:00 AM

A lively poem on zinnias, which are beautiful flowers. Perfect rhyme which I lack. Best for a win.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/26/2024 4:55:00 PM

Victor, for what I’ve read so far you do not have a lack of rhyme, also you do free verse well, something I cannot do. Thank you… Beryl

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/25/2024 8:38:00 AM

Dear Beryl, A wonderful celebration showing the beauty of Zinnias with such elegance and grace. It's like a gentle breeze through a garden, each line a delicate petal unfurling. Your words capture the essence of nature's splendor and the intricate wonders that surround us. I loved that through Zinnia's bloom, you evoke a sense of awe and reverence for the Creator's artistry, leaving me mesmerized by the beauty of the world. - Blessings, Daniel

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/26/2024 4:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Daniel, I’m delighted with the things you’ve said about this poem and appreciate every word, each one a treasured gift.Blessings in return… Beryl

Christina Bowring

Date: 4/25/2024 4:41:00 AM

Dear Beryl, absolutely love this poem and I love the quote too. Stunning! I love the vivid and beautiful imagery that you have so magically conjured up here. The flow and rhyme is so enchanting and delicate. ‘ morning mist’ ‘ earth is kissed’ ‘ proud they sway’ and I especially enjoyed the last stanza. A delightful read. I’m going to go and look them up too. Good luck in the contest. I’m sure it will be regarded highly. Blessings to you xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/25/2024 4:47:00 AM

Dearest Christina, thank you so much for your delightful review, I value your input and encouragement. Blessings in return… Beryl

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/24/2024 5:47:00 PM

I fully concur with your viewpoint; that quote is truly exquisite. Zinnias are exquisite, vivid flowers, and you have captured their beauty admirably in this delightful tribute. In every instance, lovely rhyming.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/24/2024 8:45:00 PM

Thank you Sotto, I truly appreciate your encouraging words… Beryl

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/24/2024 3:47:00 PM

wonderful rhyme scheme, descriptive words, and images (dancing queens proud they sway) all of which made for a delightful read. Zinnias are about the only thing we can keep alive in the hot August heat here in Texas. They're hearty and beautiful. Best wishes with the contest, Beryl & have a great evening, hugs, Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/24/2024 3:51:00 PM

Thank you very much Sara, I’m delighted that you enjoyed the read, those words mean a lot. Have a lovely evening you and Bill… Beryl

Robert Sidwell

Date: 4/24/2024 10:30:00 AM

I love zinnias and enjoyed your poem! Good luck in the contest!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/24/2024 3:47:00 PM

Thank you so much Robert, I admit I didn’t know the meaning of Zinnia, had to look it up. Regards, Beryl

Silent One

Date: 4/24/2024 9:39:00 AM

That is a lovely quote and I fully agree.. Zinnia are beautiful colourful flowers and you have written great tribute to them on here.. love rhymes as always..

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/24/2024 9:42:00 AM

Thank you Silent one, I’m truly grateful as always… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/24/2024 9:25:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "Zinnia" flower write. Looks like we both did this one. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........................

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/24/2024 9:38:00 AM

Thank you Paula, I read and commented on your Zinnia poem too, it’s truly wonderful. “Good Luck” to you also. Keep writing… Beryl