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Zinc White and Blue Ultramarine

I hear currawongs threading their melodic calls through the trees, sewing a dark into the cold air. And far below, a flock of white cockatoos screech their noisy chaos along the deepening shadows of the valley floor. They seem like dabs of zinc white escaping from a painting, sprouting wings to lift them from the canvas and fly them to where they flicker on the edge of the unseen, before dissolving forever into the distances of blue ultramarine.

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Date: 4/13/2024 5:28:00 AM
Hello Paul, your poem is a breathtaking journey through nature with such wonderful symbolism. The juxtaposition of the melodic currawongs and the chaotic cockatoos creates a beautiful contrast, echoing the complexities of life. I loved The imagery of zinc white and blue ultramarine which adds depth and mystery, inviting reflection on the fleeting beauty of existence. An amazing poem! - Blessings, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/14/2024 6:09:00 AM
You certainly possess a gift for getting inside of a poem Daniel, interpreted with much sensitivity and thought. Feel honored by the effort you put into your comments...thankyou my friend.
Date: 4/11/2024 5:37:00 PM
I felt the images escaping from the canvas and becoming words on the screen. I loved the imagery and the contrast you created(white cockatoos and black currawongs.) These words, however, remain with me: they flicker on the edge of the unseen, before dissolving forever into the distances of blue ultramarine. Such a captivating masterpiece. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Paul.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/14/2024 6:03:00 AM
Thankyou Sara for such positive comments about the poem. It's difficult to know if what drives a poem into existence actually comes through, your feedback is therefore mportant to me as it gives a knowledgeable and informed response for which I am so grateful. Pleased this poem spoke... again my sincere thanks... .
Date: 4/11/2024 7:21:00 AM
Paul, your images come to life, leaping from the canvas you created with your lines. What a contrasting scene you paint by having a flock of zinc white birds fly off your background of dark blue. I would love to see a painting of what I see through these verses. Even more stark is the comparison between white cockatoos and black currawongs. I had to look that one up!
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/11/2024 2:49:00 PM
I have little talent with the brush dear Lin and therefore try to use words to fill the white spaces. In fact when I turned the poem in the second stanza, I did think of you and your painterly skills...tried to imagine a painting hanging above my poem as you often do with yours. Oh well, at least I have the solace of yr wonderful comments mt friend.

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