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Zilch Reasoning

Mumbo gumbo's blind faith deepening cynicism in metaphorical meaninglessness of judicious social twaddle's protocol, they ask, “have you found Jesus yet??” 'I hadn't a figgy scooby doo he was lost...' nothing happens for a reason aside from the seasons - - children starving, wars in the name of ungodly religions, poverty exponentially rising, mother earth is crying middle class is dying, whilst dogmatism & the nefarious masses thrive there are virtually & literally nor otherwise, zero, zippo, nada, concrete reasons why_ 'hear no evil', mere riddling rhymes make naught a minuscule bit of sense

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/27/2016 7:18:00 AM
Cool doesn't even begin to describe what I just read, actually the opposite would apply better, heated works well I think. You have touched, no, slammed a plethora (you like that word?) of subjects in that very unique style that I have come to enjoy so much. There is so much truth in your words, blindly we go because we can't see past the rhetoric. Really heated (cool)
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Date: 10/24/2016 9:38:00 PM
Very passionately expressed, Paloma. Your poem is unrelenting in its truth bombs against the hypocrites of religion. They love to say, do as I say. But don't do as I do. Your voice is a powerful one. You are blessed to have such a gift. Love you always. RW
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Date: 10/24/2016 9:40:00 PM
Oh yeah, the scooby doo line was cool. Much love to you, Paloma. RW
Date: 10/23/2016 3:03:00 PM
So much to ponder about here, so much pain in this world indeed.. and in these moment Jesus is not lost..We are lost in our selfishness of a world...We dont need to find Jesus, because He found us first, We just need to find ourselves and ask What can we do better? Thanks for this i trospective poem, Excellent indeed, made me question my faith ,nt knowing if i find an answer, Awesome.. I needed this.
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Date: 10/23/2016 9:19:00 AM
I can get muuuuuch lazier and proudly so. :)
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Date: 10/23/2016 9:03:00 AM
This is more than a poem , I'm not sure what the word is, but it's an instant classic I can envision students studying in a not so distant future while trying to understand how a society could self collapse which contained folks capable of so eloquently speaking on its behalf such as you have here. I was going to print it off and put it on my desk but the printer is way in the other room and it seems to be offline and my little legs don't quite the energy to walk over there presently. 7*9999
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Paloma P
Date: 10/23/2016 9:11:00 AM
Epitaph? Ha...Muchas gracias for such a glowing review Phillip! And, how lazy can you get??
Date: 10/23/2016 8:09:00 AM
Yup, I think... ;-) Can-O-worms, how it squirms! Toppa the morning atcha ~j
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Paloma P
Date: 10/23/2016 9:09:00 AM
I enjoy opening those can-o-worms, this one has a flip lid. :)

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