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Zhwoop

When sending out an I-Phone text, I listen for the noise That lets you know your text was sent – It’s one of texting’s joys. The sound is soft and sensitive; It gently does convey The fact your message made it through And now it’s on its way. A little tiny airy zhwoop Describes the note I hear. It’s like a subtle sigh that someone’s Whispered in my ear. I rarely text, but when I do, The part that I love best Is waiting for my confirmation, Zhwoopily expressed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/4/2012 4:24:00 PM
Your the best ilene. The rhyme and rythem just flows like butta'.
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Date: 10/1/2012 10:30:00 PM
Very nice poem ilene.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 10/1/2012 4:14:00 PM
I have no clue about this but this is a Great little poem about that sound!!
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Date: 10/1/2012 12:45:00 PM
you said it with flair and glitz, ilene.." zhwoopily expressed!... a delight!..:) huggs!
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Date: 10/1/2012 5:49:00 AM
What a nice clever poem you have here, Ilene!...Mine goes 'didlely beep' and it IS a comforting sound now that I think of it - Tim
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Date: 9/30/2012 7:41:00 PM
What a lovely rhyming poem. Since you've read my poems you know that I love Rhyme. What a great subject to write a poem about too. I absolutely adore your poem. Bravo!
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Date: 9/30/2012 4:36:00 PM
You're farther along with technology than I! I feel I'm missing something not hearing the 'zhwoop!!!.' A delightful piece, with your trademark cadence and rhyming. BRAVO Ilene!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 9/30/2012 3:13:00 PM
Thank you for the I-Phone text, and visit on my poem Ilene. - A poem with modern word is "in" today, well done - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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