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The vernacular language that I use Slips into my writing also and can confuse Those from other countries and regions Sometimes my language is macabre For I slaughter the English language From the teachings of my upbringing And also from the family and associations My language patterns have taken formation I wish that the zephyr of higher learning Could sweep across and saturate me With an instant knowledge of a broader Vocabulary and grammar so that writing Would become an eloquent and easy Part of my life gracing me with flowery Words that would bless each heart That reads my work consuming each morsel Sponsor:Brain Strand Contest: Any poem from your first 100/ any form/ max 15 lines

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Date: 10/11/2011 4:40:00 PM
LOL, I'm sure you never slaughter the English language! Love this witty and thoughtful piece
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Date: 7/8/2010 10:46:00 AM
I know this would not be the case with you, of course Sara. But many folks are stuck up in their hoods of educated mentality. So tragic, they can't find any of mercy's wisdom of heart. Smile, Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/6/2010 5:18:00 AM
enjoyed this one mom, I think all authors would have these feelings at times. Your work is great to me!! did you see my poem is she the one, I dedicated to you?
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Date: 7/5/2010 12:23:00 PM
As I had said prior I can't understand lots of poems. And my dictionary is'nt big enough for some of these words.
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Date: 7/5/2010 11:34:00 AM
Dear Sara, poetry should not be about a specific dialect; that is restricting. Poetry has no bounds or borders. It flows across hills, valleys, oceans, and lands. It appeals to all cultures, norms, and civilizations. Just keep writing, and write as your spirit moves you. Mix up the words if that is your desire and just let them flow connotatively. You can do it with style and grace; go for it! Great expressions! Joseph
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Date: 7/5/2010 9:48:00 AM
Your words are always a blessing,sweet friend!C
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Date: 7/5/2010 8:13:00 AM
I've never noticed a lack of good vocabulary in your poems, Sara. You use language well to express your thoughts. Love, Carolyn
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