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Quote: "In zen we don't find the answers. We lose the questions." ..zen philosophy Beneath the plum tree by the Zen pond's side, Its vivid hues reflected in the water's glide, Autumn leaves, a kaleidoscope in motion, Swim with carps, in a colorful perpetual devotion. The optimist gazes, sky-bound, feeling free, As leaves brush top of the tree, a sight to see, But the pessimist sees inspirations wane, Leaves wither, decay, in autumn's refrain. The autumn moon, its silver light cascades, Galaxies, stars, in its gentle tirades, The universe contained, in tranquil grace, Even a plum leaf's fall stirs the quiet space. What is the sound in silence's domain? Who listens to its whisper, its refrain? The peaceful heart hums, a silent song's plea, Yet ponders, who hears its melody free?

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Date: 4/27/2024 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely "Zen" write/quote/beautiful picture. Love This One... Have a blessed weekend..................
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Date: 4/27/2024 10:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend, Jay :) - hugs
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Date: 4/27/2024 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations Jay for your top placement in this contest with a lovely write "Beneath the plum tree by the Zen pond's side". Particularly appreciated following lines: "The universe contained, in tranquil grace, Even a plum leaf's fall stirs the quiet space. "
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Date: 4/26/2024 1:58:00 PM
Jay, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent poem, I love the image and quote too, Constance
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Date: 4/22/2024 3:51:00 PM
a delightfully flowing poem. I appreciate your take for the contest. For me, the last four lines say a lot about Zen. Well crafted and meaningful poem full of serenity and peace. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 4/22/2024 2:57:00 PM
Love how you did Zen. You thought outside the box. I was taking it too literally so I avoided it!
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Date: 4/22/2024 12:05:00 PM
Beautiful. I sense a whiff of Whitman in your wit. I love your last line. Very Heisenberg.
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Date: 4/22/2024 10:25:00 AM
Serenity, equilibrium, and peace of mind are all zen, Jay, very well-crafted entry for the contest...
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Date: 4/22/2024 10:14:00 AM
- Zen, in harmony and peace - I like your contribution to the contest, Jay ... good luck :) - hugs
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