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Zahra was a woman and erotically lovely Youthful, beautiful and passionate Xanadu, an ice mountain paradise was her existence Where she lived with her lover, a Vampire, two hundred years un-dead Utterly intoxicating was this man Together they dwelled in bliss Sublime and spiritual was their lovemaking Rapturous murmurs of forever life his promise Quivering, she whispered her deep love Possession and control was his Often he left their paradise to hunt Never-failing to find the red blood they drank Moments of madness haunted her Leaving her life behind was her sadness Kissing him always calmed her dead heart Just before dawn they climbed inside an ornate coffin Intertwined in each other arms Hypnotic was his hold on beautiful Zahra Gentle his cold touch Flawless was their un-dead existence Entrancing and ethereal is how she perceived him Divine and desirable she could not resist Charming her was easy for this dark un-dead man Bedazzling her with whispered words and promises And keeping her, his love prisoner . . . __________________________ September 30, 2015 Poetry/Reverse ABC/Zahra Copyright Protected, ID 15-713-514-0 For the contest, First Ever ZYX, sponsor, John Lawless 4th Place

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Date: 10/16/2015 2:50:00 PM
Wow!! This one is wonderful. Congratulations on your win a 7!!!
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Date: 10/15/2015 9:47:00 PM
Broken, Nice to see you on John's winning list. Congratulations on your win. ** Love SKAT
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Date: 10/15/2015 1:52:00 AM
Congrats on superb win broken with this wonderful write!
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Date: 10/15/2015 1:23:00 AM
WOW! many congrats on your win:-)hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/15/2015 12:50:00 AM
Constance nice win!!!!
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Date: 10/14/2015 9:51:00 PM
BW, I'm glad to see you standing on the winner's podium with this write. I enjoyed it when I first saw it and I enjoy it now. Congratulations on your winning write it was well deserved:-)Alexis 7
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Date: 10/14/2015 7:27:00 PM
AH, BW, the dark side of "forever" love. Nice take on the zyx contest. Thanks for taking the time to tip-toe through the consonants and vowels.
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Date: 10/2/2015 1:18:00 PM
Scary but hypnotic! Your expression holds rthe reader!
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Date: 10/1/2015 4:02:00 PM
Forever a love prisoner. With the right person, this could be amazing!! Very nicely done, Constance.
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Date: 10/1/2015 3:51:00 PM
Boy, You can write !!!
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Date: 10/1/2015 1:40:00 PM
- Hot and beautifully bloody love relationship :) - A wonderful poem, B.W. ! - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2015 11:13:00 AM
Great write, BW. Flows beautifully, without looking you wouldn't notice it was an ABC.
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Date: 10/1/2015 9:49:00 AM
this write about the blood sucker....well its that muhf*****....and please forgive me for the French....but your words are always so intense....;)
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Date: 10/1/2015 8:01:00 AM
Kept me spellbound! Good luck wings!
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Date: 10/1/2015 7:31:00 AM
Wow! BW, you did good job in penning the abcs' in reverse. I enjoyed the flow. Great imagery. This is such a fascinating tale.Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis 7
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Date: 9/30/2015 10:00:00 PM
This is a wonderful entry Broken, John will enjoy and be dazzled by your poem.. LINDA
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