Ywte

Her plumage allures Curvaceous in her wiggle Like a duck waddles In trance I am, captured so She in view, I follow true http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-17.php

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Date: 4/9/2011 12:32:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. The title caught my attention--an asset for any poem. Thank you for making me smile today and for your kind comment. Karen

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 4/9/2011 10:19:00 AM

i wonder what inspired this poem :),it made me chuckle,cute and sweet!Quack Quack >@ :>

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2011 10:02:00 AM

I've never seen a YWTE, James, but had a chuckle at your response to hher "waddle." Humor and a touch of romance make for a nice combination in this delightful tanka! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2011 11:51:00 PM

hahaha, like a duck waddles! fun.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/8/2011 6:11:00 PM

Roamantic and creative write, James

James Foulk

Date: 4/8/2011 2:54:00 PM

this was a great write James, enjoyed reading this and thank you again for your support and for reading my other poetry.