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Yuck Mouth

wow! she is so beautiful! i would like to get to know her. i wonder what is her name. look at her. she is dressed very nice. goergous hair, pretty smile. how can i get her attention? i know. ill ask her the time. excuse me miss, do u have the time ? " yes , its a quarter pass nine". thank you, have a nice day. omg.. her breath smells like an ash tray. and she has a yuck mouth.

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Date: 5/7/2016 2:04:00 AM
Laurie , nice to read this...skat
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:03:00 PM
laurie cyars, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. :) Love -LINDA-
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Date: 11/22/2011 7:26:00 AM
Yup, that's hard to rebound from.
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