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You,You,You

You, an Your caramelized, golden skin, deliciously fashionable, courses through me, No doubt, in style, Stalking crazy flows; or crazy poses, For They are photogenically memorized In my mind, to unfold, your album among the pros, to #1, I see you clearly, with no fear against your foes, I verbally brag, wanting you, In the same quotes you speak, GOD only knows, from head- to- toes, which in scripts my soul, down to the heart of our children, I must bare, as we adore their love, and ours along side the almighty, because you are that life, I want in mine, for I won't ever let you be, So please marry me, me, me....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/19/2012 5:31:00 PM
Well structured poem using talent that most will envy.You leave no doubt as to your devotion. In an ally fight, I want you on my side... Deepest respect.... Jake
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/21/2012 5:27:00 AM
Always have ur back jake thank you love big Carma xoxox
Date: 11/19/2012 7:36:00 AM
WONDERFUL WRITE CARMA,KEEP EM COMING LOL,THUMBS UP
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/19/2012 8:37:00 AM
Thanks so much richie, for you, you, you, always, Lol love with an addiction,thumbs are up... Love ya big Carma
Date: 11/19/2012 3:48:00 AM
Very expressive love poem. Right from the heart. Great work Carma.
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/19/2012 8:33:00 AM
Thank You Jon, got a BIG heart, glad u agree, thanks again... Xoxox Carma
Date: 11/18/2012 11:39:00 PM
Pretty nice way of expressing!
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/19/2012 12:54:00 AM
Thank You Junate
Date: 11/18/2012 11:37:00 PM
This is very good Carma, captured me from beginning to end, blessings, Carl
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/19/2012 12:55:00 AM
Thank you much Carl
Date: 11/18/2012 7:36:00 PM
Beautiful write, Carma. I can feel your gentle, bare all heart. Love your write. It always takes me somewhere. Love ya, Toquyen
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/18/2012 9:52:00 PM
Enjoy the RIDE Lol....
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/18/2012 9:51:00 PM
Thank You Toquyen, will always take you to the clouds deep off to the unknown love ya always Carma
Date: 11/18/2012 5:27:00 PM
Very deep piece from a even deeper soul. I like the way you write. Michael
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/18/2012 5:34:00 PM
Thanks so much Michael, I will keep them coming, love always Carma

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