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You'Ve Lost That Loving Feeling

You’ve Lost That Loving Feeling You left me like Alice, lost in Wonderland, running in circles with my heart in my hand. I thought our love was so beautiful and strong. Tell me, please tell me, where did I go wrong? Have I lost my luster, and I’m no longer thrilling; or have you simply lost that loving feeling? Wretchedly, I’ve watched you slowly slipping away; with no pride left, I’m down on my knees to pray. I’m begging, baby, sweet baby, please come back; even though you left my heart mummified in black. Ignoring my pleas, you walked out the door, slashing my heart to pieces, hurting me to the core. Yet, I can’t fathom why it’s you I still adore. It’s killing me ‘cause my heart can’t stand the pain… the kind that pierces like silver bullets of rain. But only God knows why I still want you so badly; my love, give me another chance and I’ll do anything gladly. Yeah, you may have found someone new, but every beat of my heart beats only for you… so please, please just love me like you used to do. 06-12-2018 Contest: Grens Evergreens #4 Cilla Black Sponsor: Teppo Gren Song: You’ve Lost That Loving Feeling Placement: 1st

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Susan Gentry

Date: 7/13/2018 8:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your #1 win. I've always liked this song and your poem fit perfectly. Well done! :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/13/2018 9:28:00 PM

Thank you Susan, I always appreciate receiving your kind feedback and wonderful compliments. Wishing you a lovely weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 7/13/2018 10:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Pandita. You did a magnificent job in writing your poem to the song. Hugs Eve

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/13/2018 10:55:00 AM

Hi Eve, thank you so much for your lovely comments and compliments! I am happy you enjoyed my poem. Have a beautiful weekend my friend. Hugs and warmest regards. Pandita

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/13/2018 10:45:00 AM

I am happy to see you my friend at the top of the podium--well deserved in every respect..no surprise given your awesome talent, Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/13/2018 10:54:00 AM

Hi Vijay, thank you very much for your kind words and for reading and appreciating my work. Have a wonderful, relaxing weekend, my friend. Pandita

Joseph May

Date: 7/13/2018 6:08:00 AM

Dropping back with my Congrats..

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/13/2018 8:44:00 AM

Hi Joseph, thank you so much for your kind congratulatory words! Have an enjoyable weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Robertina B.

Date: 7/2/2018 5:36:00 PM

Such a magnificent rhyme, Pandita.. Penned so perfectly! This stellar creativity of yours will make the perfect lyrics in a song.. So heartfelt and musical! I enjoyed it so much.. Blessings to you, my dear friend..

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/3/2018 3:00:00 PM

Dear Robertina, thank you my dear friend for your always lovely compliments which I so very much appreciate! Blessings, hugs, and love. Pandita

John Hamilton

Date: 6/27/2018 9:22:00 AM

Wonderful write of longing and desire for reconciliation. Well done Pandita!!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/27/2018 9:25:00 AM

Thank you, thank you kindly John! I appreciate your lovely compliments! Best regards and hugs. Pandita

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/26/2018 6:34:00 AM

WoW! Pandita, This is such a good poem for the contest theme. You complimented the song and more with your exceptional lines. I was transported to a time when I longed for an old flame to "love" me again. At the time I would have done anything for his affection again. I was young and naive at the time. These days I say "Hit The Road Jack". I wish you the best of luck in the contest. PS, I was not familiar Cecelia Black's cover of song. I was only aware of The Righteous Brother's cover.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/27/2018 9:38:00 AM

Thank you, my friend, for your lovely feedback and compliments! Like you, when I was younger I would get hung up on boyfriends - now that I am a little wiser and more experienced, I have learned when to let go! :-). Have a beautiful day! Hugs and love. Pandita

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/21/2018 1:58:00 PM

I dare say he has lost your loving feeling. A genuine and generous love as you have portrayed in your poem is definitely a gain for you! Stay gracious the love within is a heavenly treasure you are to cherish! Looking forward to reading another version of a rejoiced love. Always a pleasure to read your beauties Pandita. Stay safe and blessed.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/21/2018 3:19:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear sweet Besma! Your words are always precious to me! Hope you are enjoying a most beautiful day, my friend! Hugs and blessings. Pandita

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/15/2018 9:20:00 PM

So many emotions, ones that touch the heart. I felt every moment, each word. This could be placed to music. ~ Maia

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/15/2018 9:58:00 PM

You are very welcome. May you have a wonderful weekend as well. ~ Maia

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/15/2018 9:40:00 PM

Hi Maia, thank you kindly for stopping by and for your lovely comments and compliments that mean a lot to me! Have a very relaxing weekend! Best regards and hugs. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2018 7:24:00 PM

Another one for Teppo's contest, and you have captured the essence of that beautiful song very well, Pandita. I remember that song very well. So filled with angst.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/15/2018 7:46:00 PM

Oh yes, an old favorite of mine too! Thank you Andie' I always appreciate receiving your kind feedback and compliments. Wishing you a lovely weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/15/2018 9:58:00 AM

I absolutely love reading this wonderful poem of yours, the pain of losing a love one, a fav for me, good luck in the contest

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/15/2018 10:08:00 AM

Thank you, Faraz - what a lovely compliment! Hope you are having a great day! Hugs. Pandita

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/15/2018 9:16:00 AM

I like how you connected with the song and the imagery of Alice. Well crafted Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/15/2018 10:09:00 AM

Thank you, thank you kindly Richard! I appreciate your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/14/2018 3:07:00 PM

- This is wonderfully written with feelings, Pandita - Love it :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2018 3:40:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, thank you ever so much for your lovely compliments! Have a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/13/2018 1:09:00 AM

Nicely penned, Pandita. Well done!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2018 11:07:00 AM

Thank you kindly Caren! I appreciate your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/13/2018 12:55:00 AM

Brilliant write Pandita, I just love the music of that era. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2018 11:03:00 AM

Hi Tom, thank you so much! I always appreciate your encouraging compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/12/2018 7:20:00 PM

Full of love and kindness...

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2018 10:46:00 AM

Pashang, thank you ever so much for your lovely compliments! Have a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

Lyric Man

Date: 6/12/2018 7:11:00 PM

Pandita, that guy is crazy and blind. You've lost nothing. Don't pander to the Baffone. Dance with me until you can't remember his name ;). Awesome write!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2018 10:18:00 AM

Hehehehe - you're absolutely right! Thank you my friend for your awesome comments! Have a great day! Love and hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 6/12/2018 5:17:00 PM

I love the poem, Pandita.. luck in the contest.. Hugs

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2018 10:16:00 AM

I am so happy that you enjoyed reading this poem, Eve! Thank you so much my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/12/2018 5:01:00 PM

Oh, this is so amazing, a poem to read time and time again..Number one on the charts.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2018 10:12:00 AM

Harry, you made my day with your lovely compliments - thank you so much! Hugs. Pandita

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/12/2018 4:06:00 PM

one of my fave songs which you lit up through your remarkable work, pandita!,,huggs

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2018 10:07:00 AM

Thank you, Nette - what a lovely compliment! Hope you are having a great day! Hugs. Pandita

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/12/2018 2:55:00 PM

I can hear it! Well done! Good luck in the contest Pandita :) xomo!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/12/2018 3:53:00 PM

Thank you, thank you kindly Maureen! I appreciate your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Joseph May

Date: 6/12/2018 2:41:00 PM

Great take on the song Pandita..Well penned..hugs

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/12/2018 2:44:00 PM

Hi Joseph, thank you so much! I always appreciate your feedback! Hugs. Pandita

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/12/2018 2:38:00 PM

Full of loving and longing, your poem sends an ardent message..sure to reach his heart. Well articulated emotional journey...enjoyed reading your poem Pandita..best for a win.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/12/2018 2:39:00 PM

Dear Vijay, I appreciate receiving your high compliments and wishes - thank you very much, my friend! Best regards always. Pandita