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You'Ve Lost Me

Dont read into what i say and do Trust that deep inside im just like you We don't agree on each every word But just the idea of it's totally absurd I don't claim perfection in myself But just for this i'm put on the shelf? Happily you point out all my faults While my retorts I shut up in vaults I dismiss what you say as valid remarks For the pain I caused has left its marks But someday you might stop and see The hurt kept in is why you've lost me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/21/2010 10:11:00 AM
I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Not. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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