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You'Ve Changed My Life Completely

You’ve changed my life completely Can’t bear it when we‘re apart For every waking moment You are forever in my heart I can’t stop smiling when I think of you Love everything you say and do Can’t wait until there comes a time When I know you’re truly mine A word from you and I'm wearing a silly grin You're the cream in my coffee, the sugar in my tea I feel I can face the challenges of life and always win You have become the missing part of me Because of you I now feel whole My heart is full and at last I'm content I feel your warmth in the depths of my soul Every second with you is a second well spent Just a smile from you and my heart skips a beat With you in my life I am fully complete We have our whole life ahead to share You’re the love of my life no other can compare A million beautiful butterflies landed on us as we slept They carry us to paradise where loving souls are kept Here we're given holy blessing for the relationship we share The angels smile in heaven when true love is in the air Written By Jan Allison & Darren Watson 11th July 2014

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James Horn

Date: 9/20/2015 4:11:00 AM

Jan, Aha. Another Horn making a comment. Needed this to rejuvenate me this AM. Jim Horn

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 8/31/2015 4:25:00 PM

Very lovely x Wendy

Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2015 6:34:00 PM

Its a very special poem to our both Wendy and after a year we are writing together again which really is a dream come true:-) hugs jan xx

Bhavna Khemlani

Date: 11/7/2014 8:40:00 AM

How cool! Congrats. It's amazing how someone or a moment can change one's life and it reflects through poems. Regards, Bhavna

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 7:45:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Bhavna - I find it hard to even log on to jadazzle united as Darren is not well and we have not written together for quite a while - I think this is the last poem we wrote together and it really is a very special poem to us both:-) Hugs Jan x

Ken Carroll

Date: 7/18/2014 5:11:00 PM

Lovely romantic write and collaboration!

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/18/2014 6:38:00 PM

Thanks Ken I am the luckiest lady in the world to have such a wonderful writing partner as I do with Darren:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 7/18/2014 2:48:00 PM

awww, what a beautiful write - great that you guys are so happy together

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/18/2014 4:50:00 PM

Thanks Jack writing with Darren means the world to me he is the most fabulous friend. Hugs Jan xxx

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/17/2014 2:25:00 PM

Love the whole poem, but the first two lines of the last stanza.. Absolutely brilliant!!! ... Hugs.. Arlene

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/17/2014 2:56:00 PM

Its the first lyric Darren and I have written together so it is a very special poem to us both:-) So glad you enjoyed it Hugs Jan xx

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/14/2014 10:44:00 AM

I love this poem very much - the cream in my coffee and sugar in my tea. I will remember those words forever. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/14/2014 10:50:00 AM

Oh Thank you Lucilla that is a lovely comment my friend. Hugs Jan xxx

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/13/2014 6:04:00 PM

reminds me a little of the great Dave Matthews, "Spoon in Spoon, stir in my coffee"

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/14/2014 12:53:00 AM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Shi

Date: 7/13/2014 4:02:00 PM

Wow simple beautiful

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/13/2014 5:15:00 PM

thank you so much for the lovely comment Poet Shi. Hugs Jan xx

David Williams

Date: 7/13/2014 3:56:00 PM

Jan I like....David

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/13/2014 5:14:00 PM

Thanks David we had fun writing it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2014 2:42:00 PM

yeoww.. this blew me away; it just hit something special inside ... greeat collab from the both of you!.. huggs

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/13/2014 3:06:00 PM

WOW thanks Nette its our first attempt at a lyric and I am so so pleased with the result:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/12/2014 12:14:00 PM

A brilliant co-written piece. Loved the upbeat melody of it and it is an inspiring write! Congrats to both authors! BBBBBraVOOOOOOOO !!!!!

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/13/2014 1:28:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Robert:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/12/2014 10:27:00 AM

Pretty. I enjoyed reading this one. Happy writing and God bless you both.

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/12/2014 10:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment Regina. Hugs Jan xx

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/12/2014 5:31:00 AM

Now that is a beautiful duet. Put a bridge or chorus to that one and you could have a hit song. People love the love songs, and this is the type of song that inspires young love and rekindles the old. Very well done. Totally enjoyed it... Robert. Think I'll put it in my Faves.

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/12/2014 5:52:00 AM

Wow Robert thank you so much for that lovely comment you have made my day:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/11/2014 6:17:00 PM

7's and to fav's I love this!! and know word by word every feeling! Perfect poem, !

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/12/2014 2:24:00 AM

Wow thanks Casarah. We so enjoyed writing this one:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/11/2014 2:36:00 PM

This is so romantic Jan...Can't tell who wrote what...It flows real well and has a good rhythm...hugs Tim

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/11/2014 2:43:00 PM

Brilliant Tim that is our intention am really pleased with the result too! Hugs Jan xxx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/11/2014 2:25:00 PM

Its a wonderful lyric poem..Can I sing along?Just lovely ..both of you : )

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2014 2:28:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Charmaine - sing along! Think i will sing it in the bath lol :-) Hugs Han x

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/11/2014 2:07:00 PM

Ahhhhhh....romance! I'm captivated! hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2014 2:12:00 PM

This is our first lyric Eileen i am really pleased with the result:-) Hugs Jan xxx