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You'Ve Been Played

I think she played me on the playground juggled like a ball makes me wonder why is the world so cold? Some nights I lay in bed and ask the Lord why do we suffer in heart? time moves so slow when you try and forget someone. Forget about someone who was supposed to be separated from her husband turned out to be no good. Then I woke up and realized love is not a fairy tale just get tired of these wounds would like to close the doors. All started out as such a good time a smile that turned to be a broken heart the chemistry that pulled us together begin to pull us apart. Sometimes the illusions we see are only make believe we just want to be held and say sweet things with candy in our mouth. So, I've been played right on the playground kicked like a volley ball taken as a joke... ~

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Date: 8/16/2014 12:09:00 AM
I hope this did not really happen to you. It was very clever how you used actual "playing" images in your poem on heartbreak.
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Date: 8/14/2014 10:28:00 PM
Hi Ken; Espero que estes bien. Illusion is like a flower - it don't last. If she didn't stay it was because she was not good enough for you. Smile someone better will come... Lucilla
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Date: 8/6/2014 12:58:00 AM
Oh Ken, I think we have all been through this at one time or another not much fun is it, so glad you have resolved things now, very good poem, loved it. Take care.................Vera.............
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/6/2014 1:00:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Vera!
Date: 8/5/2014 1:11:00 PM
I feel you pain Ken...I just wrote one called feeling used....seems like this is becoming a theme with women.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/5/2014 3:07:00 PM
Thanks Tim!
Date: 8/5/2014 12:16:00 PM
your thoughts move me, ken... this is a emotion-ridden.. what a wonderful read.. huggs
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/5/2014 3:07:00 PM
Thanks Nette!
Date: 8/5/2014 1:40:00 AM
This is sad, Ken. Sorry you feel this way. Life is so tough sometimes. I hope you heal quickly!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/5/2014 1:49:00 AM
Thank you Roya..We live and learn I suppose..
Date: 8/5/2014 1:02:00 AM
This is the exact male response for my poem "Femine Fatle" Very enjoyable read!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/5/2014 1:19:00 AM
Thank you Maxine! I'll give that one a read..

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