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Youthful Fields of Summer (Haiku)

Youthful summer fields; fragrant scents of wildflowers, beneath trees of green Comments: Inspired by a portrait of a little boy sniffing a single bloom while standing in a field of wildflowers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/23/2008 1:42:00 PM
Wht a wonderful scene. Nice use of this short format to paint a picture with words. I enjoyed it. Karen
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Date: 8/26/2008 3:02:00 PM
A beautiful and delicate picture. Absolutely stunning. Regards Heidie
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Date: 8/25/2008 3:39:00 PM
Beautiful. Especially love the first line. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/25/2008 12:37:00 PM
A soft and sweet poem. Can almost see the portrait in my mind! Best wishes...Carrie
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Date: 8/25/2008 12:13:00 PM
Whatever the inspiration, this is so clear and so well composed. Perfect form and flow. Very wel written. Michael
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