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You'Re Right

I told you i loved you, I sold you a lie. I needed and bleeded you into "my guy." I matched us and hatched us a life we could lead, I wrote us a story you'd beg just to read. I hated and rated your touch from the start. Inside always plotting and roting your heart. I told you i'm sorry, Sung songs of regret. I cried when i left you, the scene had been set. I lived next beside you, Shared bodies and bed. All the while meaning to mess with your head. I promised you laughter, but meant many tears. I took all your secrets, recreated your fears. I told you I loved you, I meant every word. What you think of me- this crap is absurd.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/2/2011 5:18:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Reagan. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 9:39:00 PM
Good wording and rhyming. Check the last line in your third verse: the word "roting" should be correctly spelled "rotting". This is a good poetic description of a love-hate relationship.
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:49:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. check out our contests too....
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