You'Re Mine

So tired of spinning my wheels, I just can't wait to get into my heels Hours of fun and mingling Gives me a warm sensation, almost tingling. All these people Single place One time For us, It's a sign It's divine We're happy You're mine

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John Posey

Date: 7/10/2013 4:25:00 AM

There is nothing like the joy of love returned and shared. The assurance of this is overwhelming. May happiness continue on your journey through life. ... Love ya... Jake

Wayland Bunch

Date: 6/29/2013 4:36:00 AM

Nice change of pace, I mean looks like things are looking up. Nice write.

Lynn Dolly
Date: 6/29/2013 4:43:00 AM

They are! Thanks ;)

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/13/2013 9:22:00 AM

I can tell you had a lot of fun layering this piece out. This was really cool to read. :)

Lynn Dolly
Date: 6/24/2013 5:22:00 AM

Thank you Drake! It was a pretty awesome day!