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You'Re Amazing

You're a message from heaven and the waves on the ocean. Your eyes are so lovely your smile is so happy. Don't compare yourself to others Sweetie, you're like a queen. Your heart is very young and voice is a sweet birdsong. Your mind is like the sky Yeah, you are so shy. Don't compare yourself to others Sweetie, you're the moonshine. I want your happiness I want your goodness Oh, don't be sad ever Please smile forever! Don't compare yourself to others Sweetie, you're just amazing.

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Date: 7/13/2020 2:30:00 AM
"Your mind is like the sky..." Good line. Finding love brings one to life and your poem expresses that very well! Have a great day, Lure.
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Imran Islam
Date: 7/23/2020 3:30:00 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful comments. God bless!
Date: 6/26/2020 10:28:00 AM
I enjoyed this missive of love. A brilliant first poem. Welcome to the soup. Blessings Rick.
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Imran Islam
Date: 6/30/2020 6:48:00 PM
Richard, thank you so much for your beautiful comments.
Date: 6/23/2020 1:08:00 AM
You know you created something special with this one. Look forward to reading more. the way you incorporated your message into the poem without ruining it was great. Best regards David in NZ
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Imran Islam
Date: 6/30/2020 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for your bold and beautiful comments. Stay safe!
Date: 5/22/2020 4:27:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful poem from a heart in love. Well written!
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Imran Islam
Date: 5/22/2020 10:36:00 PM
Thanks for your comments. Stay safe, God bless you.

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