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In a cave my heart enclosed locked away inside this fortress looking through the keyhole Ajar I hand you the key All that I am My invitation within To view the chambers deep within In its gesture I beg you enter In a feather's touch The cobwebs fall back the curtains raised to you I show everything With you my audience I see you a treasure Scattered among'st gems my emotion to you unfold Magical words whisper silently opens like flower blooming beautiful In a bouquet of colour one flower stands out [it's you] In words painting the writing on the wall Deep in my heart like a genie in a lamp If I could love Grant you wishes You would have them all Your beauty rubs deep warm within me this feeling sings in my heartbeat Your wish now my command

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Date: 9/23/2013 11:04:00 AM
This Is so romantic and loving. A beautiful way to express your emotion for that special someone. nice job
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Date: 8/30/2013 11:04:00 AM
I love genie..Did you know that ?: ) Im trying to reduce my time on ps but such beautiful poems keep me stucked-Awesome
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/30/2013 11:53:00 AM
why reduce time it dosent hurt anyone and its lovely seeing your comments you would be missed thankk you beautiful deeply appreciated
Date: 8/30/2013 6:06:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Liam ! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/30/2013 7:25:00 AM
YOU HAVE A BLESSED BEAUTIFUL ONE TO THANK YOU FOR THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

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