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Your Walk Teases Me

Y-ou and I O-ur hearts beat to the same tune U-nbelievable, your walk teases me R-ecalling the day we met, I saw you W-alking like you were on the modelling ramp A-dversities grew in me as I was teased by your walk L-ike a clown, I laughed at my heart K-nowing that its desires are farfetched T-eased by your walk E-nticed by your charm A-nd your prettiest smile S-eems like I’m falling for you E-very time you walk towards me S-omething beautiful happens M-oments with you E-rect a tower of love in my heart

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Date: 9/14/2016 6:46:00 AM
What a lovely acrostic Bongani - I once got told I walked like Marilyn Monroe - just wish I had her looks and figure too lol! :-) hugs Jan xx
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Bongani Zungu
Date: 9/22/2016 6:00:00 AM
Hi Jan. what a lovely comment, thank you. Marilyn was a work of art. She had a sexy walk and a figure to die for. Surely you can have a figure like her**let her be your motivation**wink
Date: 9/14/2016 6:30:00 AM
Contour of beauty in the teasing walk ... and a perfect acrostic too ...
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Date: 9/14/2016 6:44:00 AM
Thank you very much Sir. I appreciate you taking time and read my poem Probir.

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