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Satiny softness surrounds me as your touch ensnares me in ardent, consuming passion for which there is no exultation too much. I desire no respite, escape, dispassion as I am your unrelenting paramour offering a safe harbor for you to moor. Stay with me upon this sea of ecstasy and we shall conceive our lasting legacy.

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Date: 3/16/2024 4:04:00 PM
Romantic read like a gentle breeze! Have a nice day Linda Flower ~ AA
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/17/2024 6:56:00 AM
You are so sweet dear AA. Thank you! hugs from me! :)
Date: 3/15/2024 5:30:00 PM
Dear Linda, what a captivating expression of passion and devotion. The imagery of satin softness and ardent passion evokes a sense of intimacy and longing. I love how your words convey a deep connection and commitment, creating a vivid portrayal of love's enduring allure. Linda, this is a stirring ode to the power of touch and the bonds of love. - Blessings, Daniel
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/16/2024 8:54:00 AM
Hi dear Daniel. There is a whole science about the meaning and value of the human touch. You are correct in the intent of this poem and I appreciate your thoughtful and expressive comments. :)
Date: 3/15/2024 5:24:00 PM
beautifully passionate poem, Linda. Outstanding alliterations and rhymes. You did a great job in creating this Rispetto...I agree with what Duke said...as we age we appreciate our spouses/partners in a totally different way. Have a great weekend, hugs Sara
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/16/2024 8:53:00 AM
Hey Sara! Thank you and yes, passion changes with age. Still there perhaps, but in a different perspective. hugs! :)
Date: 3/15/2024 1:30:00 PM
Linda....wow. This is serious passion. It's not something everyone has or can even understand. I am of the belief that this happens more as we age and can appreciate our partner. Fun to read and think about.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/16/2024 8:50:00 AM
Hey Duke. Yes, passion takes a new turn as we age and interests seem to become deeper and more fulfilling. I'm glad I turned on some reading and thinking... :)
Date: 3/15/2024 7:54:00 AM
I absolutely love the way this flows like a beautiful and passionate chorus, amazing use of alliterations and great rhymes and cadence to you beautiful lines, i felt it especially as you wrote “ stay with me upon this sea of ecstasy. Pleasure reading your rispetto. Sending you light always
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/15/2024 1:16:00 PM
Many thanks dear Inky. I always appreciate the positivity and light. :)

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