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Your Token of Love

Breath taking memories, surface from within, buried in my mind, how long has it been. Enjoying the sunset, our blanket in the sand, sipping sweet wine, you ask for my hand. My heart was pounding, as I tried to speak, new love in bloom, sitting beside me. A tiny box, made of velvet so blue, holding a promise, a gift from you. Shining in the moonlight, your token of love, you called it a star, picked from above. Two hearts joined, as we said I Do, memories in the making, memories of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/18/2009 4:02:00 PM
awww this is so beautiful...Livy
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Date: 1/18/2009 10:00:00 AM
Ain't that what life is all about, sharing our hearts and our love with those special ones, well written, enjoyed as always. Ron
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Date: 1/18/2009 9:18:00 AM
Seize the moment. An Excellent write. Continue to share.
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Date: 1/18/2009 6:06:00 AM
A memory worth capturing in words to appreciate and remember forever. You did such a beautiful job. And aww, to call it a star from above, simply magical. Love, shar
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Date: 1/17/2009 8:23:00 PM
Christy this is so beautiful, it's enchanting almost, but a little sad in the end. mesmerizing write my friend. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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