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When I first saw that smile on your face, My heart felt a new start about to take place, She made me wonder; Will she fill that empty space? I'm pretty sure! I won't be deluded, ...But I was mistaken, it got as it always ended, I admit liking the person you abided; But it's nothing compared to my love's intensity. One day, you'll reach your potential's ability, That I clearly see in you personality. For you, time may be a complication, But for me it's just the solution. So use it wisely for your conclusion.

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Date: 1/4/2016 12:49:00 PM
enjoyed
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Naamani Badih
Date: 5/6/2016 2:23:00 PM
glad to hear so thank you :)
Date: 5/12/2013 11:49:00 PM
I love the optimism in this poem.It gives hope..' For you time might be a complixation,but for me it is the solution'.Love that verse .It is the way we see things in different angles..and it shows that for love no problem is a problem.Well penned thoughts..Charma
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Naamani Badih
Date: 5/6/2016 2:24:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine :))

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