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Your Silhouette

your silhouette lingers into a soft verse- I breathe in qualm just to sense your beauty. The willow weeps for the loss of you, and I am restless trying to forget you. I lay in agony wondering if you were scared. A steady answer wouldn’t ease my troubled insight. before you I was nothing, with you I was whole- without you I am nonexistent. to you I was but a beautiful shadow, something hovering over the light of the universe. to me you were but freedom, something to ease my anguished soul. now I am abandoned, left in solitude trying to forget everything you were. your death so sudden, my sorrow too deep- my hands tremble at the loss of you. for I cannot unlove you. your silhouette lingers into a lonely grave... October 2, 2016

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Date: 10/5/2016 6:37:00 AM
Seems to me that you're in a gloomy mood, Laura...well written :)
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Date: 10/3/2016 12:41:00 AM
You penned a nice piece.Congrats Laura
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Date: 10/4/2016 11:29:00 AM
thank you sweet Anisha :)-luloo

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