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Your Rebuke

Your rebuke My wisdom brook. Like to a rust key An excellent oil on me. As deep and sore Yet they are wings to soar. When distress like an armed man Comes with the sledge hammer To break me- into shambles They make me bold marbles. And times hatred come to stay Your love is my lifting ray. Weary to stop They keep coming non-stop The correction from the rods Comfort among odds Hurts by the stick Are scars that make me tick.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/20/2013 7:56:00 AM
congratulations..........Goodness............ SKAT
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Date: 9/19/2013 10:14:00 AM
Goodness Lane, congratulations:) In Seren's "what makes you tick" contest... always~ Linda
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Date: 9/18/2013 10:18:00 PM
Deep thoughts in this one. Congrats on your poem's win.
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Date: 9/16/2013 2:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Goodness! Love, Kim
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Goodness Lanre
Date: 9/18/2013 12:38:00 PM
thanks
Date: 9/15/2013 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you for entering my contest .... Seren
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Goodness Lanre
Date: 9/18/2013 12:38:00 PM
I am so encouraged.

Book: Shattered Sighs