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Your poems and my young eyes

Each word on the page Has its own distinctive weight, Coated in ever so viscous messages Singing in sweet droplets I read your page, Gently glancing through... Your secret emotions, Impossible for me to consume.

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  1. Date: 4/15/2011 8:48:00 AM
    Oh no, I think you thought that the word was 'vicious' syrup. I meant that sometimes we pour our deep emotions into it, and sometimes it's hard for others to feel the same way, like when I'm feeling happy and reading a sad poem, or vice versa, it has no effect on me whatsoever, kind of like vapor water. And thanks for the comment! I appreciate the thought, it's free for interpretation really, but I shall work more in getting the message across. Thanks again.

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 7:27:00 AM
    Very thoughtful. I feel the same reading some very venomous stuff.