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Your Only Way

You are in my arms but you are a million miles away. You are still kind but that is your only way. Take my heart and break it apart that is your only way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/31/2016 8:37:00 PM
Hi Bahram ... Your work and your thoughts are unique. You selected a form " I do not know". In your poem by adding another line and change the syllabus a little bit could be a beautiful Quatrain, couplet or even Rubai.... You are very talented, why not a Ghazal or masnavi.
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