Your Mastery

every morning birds bring Your acclamation every morning, I hear a new-fangled song nature’s joy, Your mastery

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/3/2010 9:47:00 AM

thanks, but I think the ball stopped rolling? and thank you for putting things in perspective for me ( you are the 2nd one to do so) I guess I was just being weird earlier not being able to think of a title for it so I ended up using weird -- weird of me huh? so yeah I am weird! happy but weird I guess! :) -- hugs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/3/2010 8:28:00 AM

you sure seem to have been on a roll :) wonderful inspiring tanka you have here --enjoyed how you celebrate the morning --thanks for this reminder :) hugs-- nikko :)

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 11/3/2010 2:43:00 AM

Yes nature is so wonderful.And I too love the birds singing outside my window to wake me up.However I'm feeling they have power to make me feel good or add to my joy -much like, for me today and any day Wilma, reading your words has the same affect -Through nature and its overall beauty I feel and appreciate the wonder of the Creator.Therefore closer to God. Thank you Love June(sylvia)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2010 10:14:00 PM

This is one cool nature poem, Wilma. Let me go see your other tanka now!!

Sena Slaughter

Date: 11/1/2010 2:45:00 PM

Beautifully written!

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 11/1/2010 1:26:00 PM

Hey Girl, it lovely and fresh. When is the book due?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2010 4:08:00 AM

Enjoyed reading of your enjoying nature and the one who created the beauty...Brought memories to my mind of God's great blessings of early morn..The cats were okay just stuffed from too much grits and gravy...They like my homecooked food so much more than catfood...Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/31/2010 2:10:00 PM

Nice poetry my dear sweet friend...love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/31/2010 1:22:00 PM

Nice expression nature's joy, Your majesty. Wilma

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 10/31/2010 11:42:00 AM

Excellent, I like every morning repeated, making it more song like to match the content.